“I just need to be doing my own thing. I’m claustrophobic here,” is what he said, before he left. And I stood there with a beautiful baby on my hip and nodded and when he came back for his last bag he held my face between his hands and kissed me full on the mouth, tongue and all, and whispered, “You have no idea how much I want you right now.”
I was never as desirable to him as when he was leaving.
He gave me one of his blue-grey looks, seductive and cold. It shot straight through me, to the wounded backspace of my own undoing, unbeknownst to me or perhaps completely knownst to me but what difference did it make now, anyway?
For him, the depth of that look lasted no longer than the five seconds it took to walk out the door.
I stood there, then, far longer than I should have. Staring at the closed door. Unable to turn away from it.
And finally at dusk I turned, walked down the hall to the bedroom, climbed into bed with the baby, and wondered what would happen next.
For a time, it was the frozen moments that made a life.
Endless circuits on the bus with the baby in my lap. Deliberately missing my stop because I couldn’t make sense of standing up.
Making my way home on foot, the baby hidden inside my loose jacket. The darkening sky. The skeletal branches of bare trees.
And in the apartment, a phone that didn’t ring.
A forgotten razor blade in the porcelain soap dish.
A dirty window pane.
And so on. Until the portentous evening that we arrived home one shoe short.
“Where’s your other shoe?” I asked the baby, taking his tiny foot in my palm.
He blinked at me.
I quickly rewrapped him and headed back into the night.
I could feel something alive in me for the first time in weeks.
Outside, a drizzling rain fell amidst steamy fog. We made our seekers’ way down one block, then two, and three.
“Don’t worry, we’ll find it,” I told the baby.
For a second, I was almost afraid of it.
I took a breath, and checked both ways before running into the street to retrieve it.
It was soppy wet, the precious white laces dirty and limp.
I pulled back my jacket to show him and was met with his wide baby eyes.
“We found it,” I went to say, but my voice caught.
I tucked the shoe carefully in my jacket pocket. Lifted my baby out of his carrier and up to my heart. And, breathing in his solid, pure scent, I hugged him for a long, long time.
When my beautiful baby and I arrived back home, an old woman in the lobby held the security door open for us. I looked her in the face with way too much intensity, I know, but it couldn’t be helped. I took her free hand in mine and said, “I don’t know where I’ve been. It was horrible.”
I felt her trying to pull her hand away from mine, and I squeezed a tiny bit tighter, enjoying the feel of her warm, pliable skin, the frail bird bones inside.
“It’s okay,” I told her, “I’m back now.”
And I let go.
12 thoughts on “dead bird”
“Where the hell does everyone go when they have to go?” – Gia
i love this quote. it has a dorothy parker ring to it. is gia someone i should know?
Oh gosh, you should see the movie! ‘Gia’ starring Angelina Jolie, based on the fantastic/tragic life of supermodel Gia.
When I saw the title I was pretty sure this was going to be about hitting a bird with a speeding Volvo and then trying to bury it with stainless spoons in a parking lot.
But this was good too. 😉
of course! i didn’t even think. what a tease that must have been for you.
still, really, this story doesn’t work and i need your help figuring out why. it falls apart when we go out searching for the shoe.
do i pull it? what do you do when you want to rework a post?
Ummmm . . . my posts are nothing like this. This is quality, mine are ramblings. I like the idea behind the shoe hunt, but I think it makes her sound more unhinged than you mean her to be. Maybe something more along the lines of the baby running for traffic and she catches him, or up all night with a nasty croup that she nurses him through (which is awful). She’d have to leave her own misery to concentrate on that which would give you the “feeling alive again” scenario. With the return to safety/health you’d be back at ” And, breathing in his solid, pure scent, I hugged him for a long, long time.” which is a beautiful sentence that any mama can feel down to her bones.
“She’d have to leave her own misery to concentrate on that which would give you the ‘feeling alive again’ scenario” ~ beautiful. that’s exactly it. thank you so much.
I love the way you talk about the baby, expressing so much love with so little words.
I love the part where she she just stands and stares at the door till dusk. And the part where she goes insanely behind that one shoe for her baby. How her baby just blinks back at her. How she hugs the baby right there in the middle of the road. I love the character. You really make her come alive 🙂
There is nothing like the arrogant exhiliration of the one leaving is there? Love the story. Beautiful. clean. essential.
“the arrogant exhilaration of the one leaving” ~ why does that make me smile?
comedy in tragedy – there is always a bit of it!